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MroczniaK

Published: May 27, 2012

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...my beautiful wings pulled out for sins...
Ran's back again;

No idea for title. D:

I got new Copics and decided to draw picture colored 100% by them. So here it is.

Do you like how I did it?
Also her wings are shining but it's invisible in the scanned picture.

FOR SALE! ONLY $20!!!

Commissions are open!~

~HEADHOTS AND CHIBI FOR ONLY $10~!!

Here's the all info: >> fav.me/d4fmura <<

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Also I'm selling ORIGINALS: >> mroczniak.deviantart.com/journ… <<

Please commission me and help me increase my drawing materials like copics which are very expensive.

Note me if you're interested!

Thank you for attention!

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RenTeufle

Jun 27, 2012

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You did and exellent job in capturing the shiney quality of her clothing and hair. There are a couple of "odd spots" where the shadow isn't quite right.
The blending of colours are amazing, but that bow in the top right corner seems a little out of place with no hard black lines around it. Even just some to and more depth for shadow would be nice and give more balance to the piece.
It would appear that her head is down, but showing some of her face with an anguished expression would really push the emotion onto the viewer, or even if her back was arched a bit so that she was folded over herself. Like this, she seems very blasé about the whole event.

You do such lovely work and I can't wait to see more!
~Ren